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Simplification in inter- and intralingual translation – combining corpus linguistics, key logging and eye-tracking

Marta Kajzer-Wietrzny, Bogusława Whyatt and Katarzyna Stachowiak

Abstract

As some scholars view inter-and intra-lingual translation as a parallel activity, it is vital to establish to what extent the products of these processes are alike, and whether the processes themselves differ. This paper investigates stylistic simplification, a frequently hypothesised translation universal which involves, among others, breaking up long sentences in the process of translation (Laviosa 2002). One of the parameters commonly used in the investigations of simplification in translations is the average sentence length. In the present study we focus on sentence length to see if the tendency to incorporate stylistic simplification is equally present in the products of inter-and intralingual translation; what phases of the translation process are decisive for sentence length; whether the scope of consultation with the source text affects sentence length. Finally, we will try to verify if average sentence length is dependent on the level of translation experience.


Marta Kajzer-Wietrzny Faculty of English Adam Mickiewicz University Collegium Novum al. Niepodległości 4 61-874 Poznań Poland

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Appendix Mean sentence length across groups and tasks

Professional Translators (PTs)Translation Trainees (TTs)
Interlingual Translation (INTER)Intralingual Translation (INTRA)Interlingual Translation (INTER)Intralingual Translation (INTRA)
Mean Sentence LengthStandard DeviationMean Sentence LengthStandard DeviationMean Sentence LengthStandard DeviationMean Sentence LengthStandard Deviation
16.451.5417.071.8418.291.416.911.57
PTs INTER vs. PTs INTRATTs INTER vs. TTs INTRA
W=50 for N=17, the difference does not reach the level of statistical significance at p ≤ 0.05W=16 for N=16, the difference is statisti-cally significant at p ≤ 0.05
PTs INTER vs. TTs INTER
U=54, the difference is statistically significant at p ≤ 0.05
PTs INTRA vs. TTs INTRA
U=125.5, the difference does not reach the level of statistical significance at p ≤ 0.05
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